Saturday, March 28, 2009

Rats Comments

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In the corners of the church
rats are scurrying and scratching
on ancient floorboards
among the dust of ages.
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Rory Hudson
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Ashraful Musaddeq 07 June 2009

'Here they are born, here they make love and here they die in generation after generation across the centuries.' These are the wonderful lines where you have indicated the life cycle of all living being! Very clever write! Thoughts provoking, I think. This is the earth where we all the living beings are completing the life span, can we go beyond? Excellent poem,10 with my love Rory.

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Eyan Desir 11 April 2009

interesting write Rats! I wish you had more flow in this poem

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