Thursday, September 20, 2007

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Rating: 2.7

I’d love to be inside the head
of the Phantom Oner as she
strikes again… with one deadly One,
cuts the previous ten right down
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Michael Shepherd
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Raveendran . 20 September 2007

7.62 for the opening and 10 for the rest

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David Taylor 20 September 2007

What's wrong with One? With only Nought added it is great, so it is great by Itself, personally I most dislike Two.....

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Oh go on, since you're grovelling, have a ten. (Hey, let's both get inside her head. There's plenty of space there, after all) . t x

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

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