.rat Race Comments

Lovely.simple and catchy.Too good a write.Similar subject in my poem Pellmell morning..if time permits kindly read it Thanks for sharing

I liked the rhythm of the second verse and I thought the ending was fine. It was a good theme and it was clear in meaning. That is why I recommend it. The rhythm was not consistent, and the rhyme was not the best. But overall, I felt it was a deserving poem. GW62

Reality of life beautifully depicted!

Timeless chase on humanity’s face To reach the top in vacant space; ..................... ... man yet defuddled by the aim spaceless trudging the path seems to be impetuous mind when slogged by the maddened world does he know what he does in rate race.....................what a wonderful poem that resounds even in the furrows of cliff, wellpenned,10+, thanks for sharing

a poem on the tiring daily race of life...a racing rising raising poem this...

nicely composed a hard hitting fact of life put across in a mild tone

It is a phase of life you race and race until reach a void at the blank end..well conceived thought.. significant write...10 Rema

you have your finger on what seems to be the pulse of life..i like the enery i felt in your poem.well done!

This is truly is the truth about life but there is soo much more than meets the eye......

Very well written..... I am sure you will also write very soon about how you reached your goals and saw a new horizon from the top. Good work.