Rasmussen Fell Here Comments
I wonder who he was, that man
that fell in eighteen eighty-eight
from a fifty-foot precipice
in Monroe Canyon.
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A fascinating account. It makes a feller want to know more, but I reckon we never will.
So many mysterious characters in the history of the old West. We will never know them, these fellow sojourner's on the path of life. This is a very good poem, I truly enjoyed it.
i 'enjoyed' the 'poem'. a disaster? truly? as you've written, you know little about the event. maybe it solved problems he [0r SOMEONE ELSE] had? maybe he was rock climbing and only fell 50 feet; he could have been near the top, ascending or descending. oops! bri :) perhaps you can consult a Utah psychic.
I get the impression we are reading the rough notes for a poem you meant to versify and rhyme later but never got around to it. stilll interesting as is
By the way, Wes, thank you for saying that 'Ballad of a Young Brave' was too good to be used just as a set-up for a gag. I have removed it from Poem Hunter, rewritten certain parts, changed the protagonist's name, changed the title, and made it into a serious poem. I will not be putting it back on PH, but will save it for the next contest.
Not at all, Wes. I never intended for this poem to be rhymed and metered. I actually wrote it at the suggestion of my sister, who has also been to the location and seen the sign on the rock wall quite a few times. I wrote it just a couple of days after she suggested it to me. (She has written many prize-winning poems and said somebody should write a poem about this, but said she just didn't feel like doing it right now, so I decided that I would do it.
Good poem! He is not forgotten now. I like the format you've used. There is an element of mystery in this story that keeps us thinking about it. I choose to believe it was an accidental fall. I think the word you want is crag.
Thanks for the comment. You are correct about the word crag. I have corrected it in the poem. I think my brain took a small vacation. Maybe subconsciously I think all words that have the K sound should start with the letter K. Kim, kangaroo, klobber, krag, kancer, kandle...
It carries the elements of a tale of mystery. He didn't tell much about him probably because he never had the inkling of the impending tragedy that had befallen him. A nerve-racking account. Thanks.
Utah was not even a state yet when Rasmussen fell in 1888, so this happened in Utah Territory. Utah became a state in 1896.
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7/28/2025 3:36:19 AM # 1.0.0
Striking drama in good composure