the last line ending with me experiencing a gentle, quiet but NICE laugh! ;) to MyPoemList, my only suggestion is to move the 1st comma to the other side of " of" . i really enjoy this poem. now, WHERE did that FIRST flash go? ? ? bri :)
The brevity of your poetic expression is captivating! I admire the style of your penning....10
A well penned poem with nice theme. Thanks for sharing.
Profound words in remarkable brevity, very thought-provoking piece.
Wish I could get a flash of genius now and again. A nice little write.
AND a catchy title. i think i figured out 'what' is rare in " your" ? life. hee-hee :)