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I visibly saw in your eye a rare shine I considered it dangerous and not fine Was I under the spell of pure wine? Why she preferred to go out of line? can be easily seen....10

V User Rating: 10.0 /10 (1 votes) Print friendly version E-mail this poem to e friend Send this poem as eCard Add this poem to MyPoemList I visibly saw in your eye a rare shine I considered it dangerous and not fine Was I under the spell of pure wine? Why she preferred to go out of line? .. can be observed only by real lover.. fine piece of writing....10

Odd out there I like it! Maybe we will all find peace in our death, if were lucky.

Good work! ! A promise was created to be broken, As was the heart; Commitment is the key to the heart That will unlock the door eternal love. Rather than break the lock With actions, empty as the words spoken, And tresspass beyond the gates, To find no love beyond the door.