Rapture Comments

Cleanse your heart to behold the grace Of the beauty contained in your gaze Why partake of world's wanton ways All you need is Love's warm embrace..... examine your faculty of reason. a very very nice poem. full of ideas. thank u. tony

All you need is Love's warm embrace ur scientifically tooo MUCHLY long you sing a SWINGING song now do read my lovely poem MOM'S SMILES O POET SCIENTIST TO whom do you belong to be longed

Interesting to know from notes you did this translation from Ms Kiani's musical rendition. She is in a class of her own. All credit to you for this amazingly good translation. Writing poetry is not as hard as translating someone's work. Shows your expertise in language and the acuteness of your intellect.

Justice done to a classic of Bulleh Shah. Such timeless poetry needs to reach a wider audience. Thanks for a stellar translation. Kudos!