Rapture Comments

imagery painted well.

I love the imagery of the scented words and 'the tepid air that caresses. A raptured poem indeed! Karin Anderson top marks

Rapture..spoken much of scripturally yet not scripturally written...interesting poem and the conjuring of words as it presents an image that one can embrace...leaves the reader thinking.

Hello Saeid you have described the Rapture perfectly... tell me how you know so much about the Rapture?

hi saeid personally i am more conventional...as poetry goes i mean i prefer a methodical systematic rhyme and rhythm like approach.... but other geners are just as....or more popular even yet a systemetic planned approach....say order in disorder would be my type of petry nice lines keep penning