Rapidity Of Love! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

A dreamer alone in a corner that d flew to the summit of a mirage shows his strong desire of searching the truth of love.

Each line beautified the poem so lovely- dream love -Flew to the summit of a mirage nice

Beautiful poem with fantastic lines.... Love is lovely trap eternal Dream won't protract as realistic Though glimpse as a miracle worthless Offer in a selfless tumbler As love is mortal sometimes! ! Very true said, Love is lovely trap eternal.. Loved reading it.

With a different view on love this piece is scripted....and it's a fact love faces mortality at the selfish hands......... very nicely presented

As love is mortal sometimes! ! A beautiful narration of true love an unending joy, an understanding a sacrifice.

When love comes across selfishness it becomes rapid and thus perishable. A thoughtful write.