Monday, October 27, 2014

Rapidity Of Love! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

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A dreamer alone in a corner
Dream of love with a haste
Love came with its crazy wings
Loop all dreams in its wings
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Akhtar Jawad 29 October 2014

A dreamer alone in a corner that d flew to the summit of a mirage shows his strong desire of searching the truth of love.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 October 2014

Each line beautified the poem so lovely- dream love -Flew to the summit of a mirage nice

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 October 2014

Beautiful poem with fantastic lines.... Love is lovely trap eternal Dream won't protract as realistic Though glimpse as a miracle worthless Offer in a selfless tumbler As love is mortal sometimes! ! Very true said, Love is lovely trap eternal.. Loved reading it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 27 October 2014

With a different view on love this piece is scripted....and it's a fact love faces mortality at the selfish hands......... very nicely presented

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Akhtar Jawad 27 October 2014

As love is mortal sometimes! ! A beautiful narration of true love an unending joy, an understanding a sacrifice.

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Ramesh Rai 27 October 2014

When love comes across selfishness it becomes rapid and thus perishable. A thoughtful write.

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