Wednesday, July 18, 2012

Rapid Eye Movement Comments

Rating: 3.5

Somewhere between reality and REM state, I met you again
And your sweet scent made me more senseless
Than I already was
Within myself, I wished that it could never end
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Elizabeth Shield
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Louis Cecile 18 July 2012

I quite enjoyed this as it is a concept I have played with before. Good poem.

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