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Walk on the wild side? ? ? ? ? ?

Intense... and very disturbing, as, perhaps, it should be.

I recieved your message to read this poem and as I sat down to begin to read I pictured this happening. This is a very deep and well written piece of art. I'm sorry that this had to happen to you, but I am so grateful that you gave the world the chance to see things from your eyes.

hi nivedita..i realy felt that the poem talks about some problems in our life but i am extremily sory to say that i too felt some difficulties to understand it... iam hapy to read ur poems, hope you will invite for reading ur next poem. »so close«

i dont know what you sead at all

Very passionate...and powerful

A great Protest Poetry piece that excels in invoking thoughts and feelings! I feel your pathos! * (*pathos - feeling (Greek)) .

Hmmm...a bit hard to understand....

It's a great piece of work.but at firs it is a little bit ununderstandble.maybe it had better you put the definition at first.but it really shows how clever you are that you have invented new ways of your poem.

======================================== ** ORIGINAL MESSAGE ******************** ======================================== From: Dove Allen To: Nivedita [poet Under Threat Of Editorial Cannibalism Date-Time: 7/2/2012 12: 27: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: My thoughts in your work ---------- Very powerful usage of words to convey your outrage towards the desecration of the 'inner sanctum' of a woman's sacred essence: her body, her mind, her soul! As always Niv, you are esoteric in your writing style. Your work(s) when read with the heart but translated by the soul, can be easily be deciphered by those willing to listen with their eyes. btw.. what is the meaning of RRG? I wish you would have included this acronym in your glossary. :) Poem Hunter’s code system failed...could not post on poem's page!

heart-wrenching....tone impregnated with the harsh reality of women....which is prevalent even in today's times.... Niv di...you have a very compassionate heart and it shows through your creative work

Well it is very well described in an appropriate manner and very well put together, although I was a little intrigued of how it doesn't quite rhyme yet goes really well. In that way to me it shows a vivid picture in my mind, although I can't understand entirely what the words mean, but the definitions of the words were helpful, everything a person needs to read and understand the poem, with all the works :) Very in depth and precise in what you put into it :) You are strongly against this and show such a horrible yet interesting perspective from the way others perceive it compared to yours. This is a pretty long comment, but I'm pretty open with what I mean and say :) So overall, awesome job! :)

you paint landscapes with your words. it seems every line was clawing back with emotion. truly unique stuff.

I liked it. Unusual to the extreme which is always okay with me. Yes, I liked it. S.

That was a very sharply expressed poem which engaged me with the pain and really made me feel sick (in a good way) . This vial act of specific (or any) violence toward women is horrible and your poem Ms Nivedita conspicuously dictates the pain that women feel. Impressive write, sublime, keep penning. :)

strong and sharp feelings expressed. Good work..keep writing.

Words of pain, expressed in a great, thought-provoking manner! Keep on keeping on, till the whole world realises and tackles the plight of a woman...

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''The distinction between 'kill' and 'help to die' is argued by analogy with the distinction between 'rape' and 'make love to'. ''J.Davies-a very good poem, well penned message-Mari.

intresting sorry to say I dont quite understand though