The Chinese incur into Ladakh with verve,
with woes and worries to India, to serve.
When the quake-victims somewhere, succour, deserve,
the Mongol breed intrude to pinch India with nerve.
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Nice attempt. Ideas are good. But the rhyming appears artificial. Make it natural. Do not deliberately force the lines to rhyme. It is not required. A greate poem need not rhyme at all! ! Feeling and flow are important...
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Nice attempt. Ideas are good. But the rhyming appears artificial. Make it natural. Do not deliberately force the lines to rhyme. It is not required. A greate poem need not rhyme at all! ! Feeling and flow are important...