Friday, April 26, 2013

Rape Is The Remnant Of Turcoman Virtues Comments

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The Chinese incur into Ladakh with verve,
with woes and worries to India, to serve.
When the quake-victims somewhere, succour, deserve,
the Mongol breed intrude to pinch India with nerve.
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Rajendran Muthiah
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Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan 26 April 2013

Nice attempt. Ideas are good. But the rhyming appears artificial. Make it natural. Do not deliberately force the lines to rhyme. It is not required. A greate poem need not rhyme at all! ! Feeling and flow are important...

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Rajendran Muthiah

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Madurai District, Tamil Nadu, India.
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