Wednesday, July 31, 2013

Rape Comments

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There in her room she lays awake but dorment, gazing at the wall praying that it moves for her sanitys sake. Tears no longer stain her face for now alchool nurtures her pain. Internal wounds exceed the flesh, her will is broken she will never convalesce.
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Alisha A. 25 August 2013

Not bad at all, good job!

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Gajanan Mishra 31 July 2013

good write, thanks , I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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Babatunde Aremu 31 July 2013

Nice poem. I like the theme. It reminds me of my poem: She Died At Last. This poem capture the deluge victims of rape pass through. However, do spell- check these: trama, innoscence, dwindeled.

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