Saturday, November 29, 2008

Rape Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sometimes words can be daunting,
other times they're just plain haunting.

Some words are loosely used,
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Alex Lewis 07 July 2009

Although this piece is dark, it carries a deep meaning (actually, dark pieces often do) . Anyway, good job!

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 30 November 2008

the title caught my eye...im glad i stopped to read this piece...if its autobiographical, i offer you my love and support..and if its a work of art i praise you heartily for having come up with something so passionately heartrending...God bless.

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Donna Nimmo 29 November 2008

A very well written poem and so sad but it happens everyday. I thought murder happened to other people till my aunt was murdered. I hope this wasn't about you. I give this a 10. Hugs, Donna

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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