**rap V ‘post Post Modern Poetry-Demystification’ Comments

trash would never hear this in my life

nice job keep up the workddhfgdhgfhd

your poems are good keep it up

WHAT THE ACTUAL

Bravo Sadiq, well done. This is new, but lovely. You are a trend setter. Keep it up bro.

Is this now the modern poetry.......well i guess i will just cut it down to phrases to make me breathe in each verse. Reading this kind of art is not my cup of tea...

my goodness, you left me breathless, what are you doin'? Well, this is a new style however, I already met this kind of work a week ago and I told the guy I can't make any literary comment because i really don't understand what's goin on. And here you are...boy, it seemed I run five miles for this type of work. You call it modern, huh? Again, I'd say yes, yes, OK...no harm done. Hope it would become a trend.

ok, this is nice..if this is sung with music, much nicer..coz rap is good to hear..but since this is written, well, read it fast, no pause, no breath needed coz there are no punctuation marks..this is very nice..it may consider as modern poetry..nice, , naizz

One long RAP with no breaks -

worked hard... and it is nice poem friend! congrats 10+

very expressive write..this read truely exhausts

In conclusion, something fried.

Remembering James Joyce. Phones, soldiers, French fries, idealized girl now ugly with husband.

i liked...liked the way you wrote this...have a good lunch before attempting another write...plain and expressive...thanks...10

u bring life into your words and emotions..excellent work! 10+++++