Saturday, October 6, 2012

Rap-Sody In Blue Comments

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All these rappers be laconically commensurate
Prosaic, characterized primarily by barbarity
Permeating vulgarity, it ceaselessly proliferates
Rhyming inconsequentially with no deference to sincerity
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Bill Marcy
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Søren Valentine 03 January 2013

I liked the language, though some words tiffed a little with the flow. a bit overdone in my opinion but nevertheless a good poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Adeline Foster 10 October 2012

Tis quite an exercise in extravagant words. Read mine - Sympathic Pain - Adeline

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