Tuesday, April 28, 2009

**rap Iv ‘artists Are Architects Of Change’ Comments

Rating: 2.7

There is no complaint today nothing I want to further nothing I want to say some sweet aches in my body I have not visited the Corner I have not seen the beloved I want to see outside the window I know the garden there is not as green when seen from the close I had seen some people being pushed for a cavalcade of thirty vehicles carrying
a high dignitary and a woman fighting the police man reminding him
of his worthless presence and restricting her freedom of movement
I requested a friend not to publish a dedication I had made to some one which may annoy him or her the poems of once in love now were
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ata khan 02 May 2009

I always had this feeling that you are different. You actually are. I'd really appreciate if you do little something more to ease reader a bit (just a suggestion) . Lovely though, more please.

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Reshma Ramesh 28 April 2009

hmmmmmmmmm when i sit bak n think..........seems like i have seen it all too......i wonder...

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Fiona Davidson 28 April 2009

Great write Sadiqullah...I liked how you have worked us all in at the end...: 0)) ...Fi 10+++

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