Wednesday, June 5, 2013

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This life is as true as words spoken
Once released becomes a lie spoken

Once relationships were like a rock
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Savita Tyagi
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Bri Edwards 10 September 2016

i spied the title, so i thought: i am permitted here. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i like cliches! ! ! cli·ché klēˈSHā/ noun noun: cliché; plural noun: clichés; noun: cliche; plural noun: cliches 1. a phrase or opinion that is overused and betrays a lack of original thought. the old cliché “one man's meat is another man's poison.” synonyms: platitude, hackneyed phrase, commonplace, banality, old saying, maxim, truism, stock phrase, trite phrase; old chestnut a good speechwriter will steer clear of clichés a very predictable or unoriginal thing or person. each building is a mishmash of tired clichés 2. want to know? look it up. ha ha! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i liked the stanza before this one, but THIS ONES TOPS THEM ALL so far. did i use a cliche? i hope so. One more thing Don't think twice about What you just read! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Savita, i was just thinking i should get off this computer, out of this chair, go outside, and wander down the roadways and into the country a bit. you've talked me into it by these words: Enjoy your summer and your wandering thanks, bri :)

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Savita Tyagi 10 September 2016

Thanks Bri for your comment.

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