East and West, North and South
and the rest nadir and zenith
Earth- dice that roll along a locus
that's predetermined!
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Very profound and uniquely Kesav. I appreciate your style. Warm regards, Sandra
loved it. witty, as always. 'Earth a dice that rolls along a locus that’s predetermined! ' very deep and beautiful. thank you. never thought brownian motion would be used in such a way! kudos.
yes, u are right.the uncertainties of life does make us feel that life is not organised but as disorganised as a brownian motion.loved it.
Her head in a basket thru random walk...King Henry did send, you've opened a flood of images! well done, regards
very significant write.... Our own choice... Very wholesome and very reflective thanks for sharing Maia
Sir, you’ve raised 2 Cs Choice or Chance [subtly] Well Devotee will look for chance = surrender [You’re Thou] And Jnani will look for choice {I’m That or Thee] Enjoyed …if I’m wrong please feel free to write me… Ms. Nivedita UK
very deeply reflective write on the plight of man on the earth, appropriately titled' random walk'. God alone knows where and why of our lives. we feel we are victims of chance and destiny. i have been trying to log on to your page for days. can you believe it, i could do it from a quaint town in Netherlands today, last night i was wondering am i really in Europe. may be it was not just random chance or flight. i had to read this poem, so beautifully penned, a bit reflective and full of wisdom and acceptance of what is beyond our comprehension. Mamta thanks Kesav. i love all your work. the sincerity and integrity just shows...
i am hopelessly searching for words that would match your words but your poem is....matchless
Very much pleasing your choice of words... certainly truthful....and definitely a masterpiece...'the concept of chance, in believe! '...well said...thank you Kesav
'no body knows but one that throws this eternal spooky dice' a line eternal for all ages...the haphazard random brownian motion holds good evenin a common man's life...lovely comparison there..'concept of chance.in believe'...the sun's throw of light to the world should be random too..a very different poem sir
very nice poem. your opening lines are wonderful and catchy too. take care