Tuesday, December 12, 2023

Random Thoughts-64 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fall evening turns in to night.
As the darkness descends
It stares at me through blinds.
I leave the blinds open to touch it back.
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When loneliness strikes, " darkness ….stares at me through blinds"… great.. we miss our loved ones, whom we have lost in the passage of time..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 January 2024

A great remembrance of a loved one. Deeply touching and poignant.

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Savita Tyagi 17 December 2023

Thank you so much all of you for your love and support.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 December 2023

You have aptly encapsulated mathematics of life here what you call random thoughts....appreciated!

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Bharati Nayak 14 December 2023

Life is really a journey.We meet countless people and things on our path.We take memories with us in this journey.A lovely poem of reminiscences.

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Bri Edwards 13 December 2023

Savita, I believe my 1st comment was taken by PH prematurely, as I believe your husband's physical presence was taken from you, BUT not your memories of him. Enjoy your memories. I give 5 ***** stars. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 13 December 2023

'Some vague thoughts- worthless In their birth and demise! ' Maybe not 'WORTHLESS' to all! ' to all! !

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