Tuesday, June 30, 2015

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Big dreams and high ego
Signature color of youth
Blood red
Lost dreams and worn out ego
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Savita Tyagi
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 10 July 2015

What we do is something that is not supposed to be done. Negatives everywhere. They may not be random.

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Mark Heathcote 04 July 2015

I enjoyed this short poem & kind of apt at this of time.

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Valsa George 30 June 2015

What a terrible paradox! When energy is there, ego prevents from doing things! When ego diminishes, no more energy left to do and summer days float by! Great write, Savita!

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Akhtar Jawad 30 June 2015

A nice poem.........................

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Narendra Jaggi 30 June 2015

lol, all of us were young once, and had similar frailties, perhaps still do, teehee. Be well! ~ Naren

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Narendra Jaggi 30 June 2015

Well, all of us were young once, and were perhaps susceptible to the same frailties, perhaps still are! Be well! ~Naren

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 June 2015

Lost dreams. Nice work.

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