Random Thoughts Comments

Haiku, a lovely set of four, random thoughts' random harvest.

Random thoughts roaming in the mind beautifully unfolded. A well deserved modern poem of the day.

Timing is crucial Being too late or too early Can cause you trouble great writing great 10++

Very nice haiku congrats on your selection poem of the day

Quick paced quick moving poem. Thank you for sharing. James McLain 🎸

Our minds go through random thoughts very often.Creating something new out of this randomness is unique. Congratulations for being selected as the Poem of the Day!

There is no method or conscious decision to randomness which is why this piece is so appealling..it outlines perfectly the rules of being random! ! Well penned and a delightful read. Lodigiana x

Very enjoyable. Like to read again and again. Congrats.

beautiful thoughts// congrats for being selected this poem as POD

interesting...quirky....plenty of food for thought expressed here...congratulations!

for newness, timing and love this life has become too short as haiku- interesting random thoughts

While South Africa was being showed by Acidic rain yesterday I was being showed by ugly critics and beautiful compliments and I like to thanks all who took time to read and comment. Special thanks to Haidee Majola and Dr. Tony B, for you support. May God bless you all

Pretty bad overall, but I kinda like the third stanza. If I think of it as guy trying to sexually satisfy a partner. Simultaneous are a noble goal, but how often does it authentically happen?

This is really a very cute poem. I love haiku but never tried to write one. Enjoyed. Congrats.

I tried writing Haiku.I think it requires much skill to write haiku.It is not as simple as it appears. Thanks for sharing your lovely haiku.

Yes random thoughts can be interesting. I have a whole series of poems that bloomed under random thoughts. Your poem just reminded me of it.

A poem on random thought has been amazingly delineated. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

Out of my mind! ! Living on Earth! Learning always. Thanks for sharing.

A clever write Martin of 68 combinations? Written clearly for us!

Martin, such a magnificent poem of the day.... Congrats for being chosen....10+++++++++++++++