Random Thought-Creation (Tanka 17) Poem by Savita Tyagi

Random Thought-Creation (Tanka 17)

Rating: 5.0


It is a puzzle
How out of One came many
Now many make an
Effort to get back to One
All but miserably fail!

Sunday, January 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: creation,unity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 08 March 2018

Really it is puzzle that out of one many came and many to get back one. Beautiful Tanka. Thanks.

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Bri Edwards 20 February 2018

i wish i knew what you mean by the last line. does it mean only those who are miserable can get back to One, whatever One is? ? i'd like to get back to one big dish of ice cream now. thanks for reminding me! ! bri :)

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 February 2018

An amazing little poem (Tanka) with significant details. Loved reading it.....10

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Valsa George 02 February 2018

We come from the only One and we return to the same One! Life is just an interlude between our starting point and our destination! Succinctly put!

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Rini Shibu 28 January 2018

Everything to be returned to its place of origin.. Good one

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