Tuesday, August 18, 2015

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Slamming your head
Against a mountain
Is not a wise choice
A flowing river always
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Savita Tyagi
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Bipasha D 17 September 2020

A wonderful poem with so much wisdom! Thanks for sharing.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2015

Follow the river's philosophy and you will be ahead. Beautiful thought.

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Daniel Brick 28 August 2015

Wonderful! Sly overstatement - quietly expressed wisdom - a life lesson delivered not with false fanfare but with confidence that the right people are listening in the right frame of mind. Your use of the phrase RANDOM THOUGHTS for these recurring poems is inspired! That's one way of seeing poetry in contrast to everyday prose: Our minds naturally think poetically, metaphorically. The POETRY is already there inside just waiting to be written out as a poem.

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