Random Thought Xl Comments

Succinctly you have compressed time in a tiny casket! Clever thoughts ingeniously presented through the metaphor of motherhood! Remarkable!

It's a very intelligent snippet which tells a lot about time.... beautiful one and enjoyed.

What a clever and meaningful poem and expressed in such a compressed way it hardly takes any time at all to read and understand. I have a direct connection to the notion that the future is having twins, namely, I have a twin sister. We've traveled the uneven road of life for 67 years. Your recurrent poems under this umbrella title of RANDOM THOUGHTS is a brilliant way of catching snatches of poetry on the wing - which are too fleeting to be posted as poems but as thoughts they're perfect.

An interesting poem.I enjoyed it.Very well expressed Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

enjoyed the style of the poem, it's beautiful