Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Random Thought Iv (On Old Age) Comments

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Childhood returns in old age
Every little hurt brings a tear and an 'ouch'!
No mom is here with a kiss and a blow soft,
But time is plentiful to dry those saline drops
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Savita Tyagi
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2014

Kitchen gadgets are turning out to be what we want them to be. Your random thoughts seem to be taking definite shape.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 August 2014

Savita you have created a beauty of flowers, and the fairy thus created, has a soul of high imagination. The beauty of your fairy has enchanted me and my heart beats you may listen to in the beats of your charming fairy, This is a story of every old man and woman. For me your poem is poem of the day.

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Akhtar Jawad 26 August 2014

Savita you have created a beauty of flowers, and the fairy thus created, has a soul of high imagination. The beauty of your fairy has enchanted me and my heart beats you may listen to in the beats of your charming fairy, This is a story of every old man and woman. For me your poem is poem of the day.

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Gajanan Mishra 26 August 2014

paving the way for greater good, thanks. good writing.

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