Friday, June 14, 2019

Random Thought 59 (New Beginning) Comments

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When all is said and done,
Much is left unsaid
And undone-
For a time comes when all is merged
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Savita Tyagi
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Mahtab Bangalee 20 June 2019

will come the time when all will be merged in one for the emerging of every new the time has to earn

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Bri Edwards 18 June 2019

many have probably thought that maNy of the things i've said and written in my 'poor' life were best left UNSAID! ! ! this poem gets too philosophical for me in its 2nd half, but....to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 June 2019

For a time comes when all is merged In a lingering silence To wait for a new sound to emerge.....outstanding conceptualization. Nice work.

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Bharati Nayak 14 June 2019

When all is said and done So much is left unsaid And undone- For a time comes when all is merged In a lingering silence To wait for a new sound to emerge- - - - Wow- -such a wonderful poem !

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