Thursday, June 29, 2017

Random Thought 46 (Saint And Crook) Comments

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A saint will not hurt you.
His company will give
You pleasure and peace.
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Savita Tyagi
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A poem of always.Nice to share.

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Savita Tyagi 09 July 2017

Thank you so much for reading and writing a comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2017

Please treat 'The' instead of 'A'. It has been inadvertently done.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2017

A saints are generally noble but now a day some of them are crooks.They steal or cheat, we should be cautious otherwise they will gobble up our fruits. You have so nicely painted it. Beautiful and meaningful poem in brief. Thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 June 2017

A saints are generally noble but now a day some of them are crooks.

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Savita Tyagi 30 June 2017

Thank you Kumarmani. your observation is so true. and I have edited the poem to include this thought.

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