Not all is disclosed to view
Untraveled lies the trackless course
Not every puzzle is intended to be solved
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Life is a foggy valley! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This most beautifully worded poem reminds me of a Dutch saying, in the end, truth will be revealed.. The clue of this poem lies in the last two lines of the final stanza. Loveliest constructed, Valsa, there is a prologue, the body and an epilogue. Your poetic words make the poem a true Beauty. I have enjoyed a very lot. A 10 and much much more
Thanks a lot Sylvia for your lovely comment! Your latest profile picture looks beautiful.....!
its been ages since we traversed each others pages ur spiritually philosophical as i dwell in rages lovely r ur intense sages contained in ur pages
We shall visit each other's pages more often! I am so glad for your poetic comment! Thank you! Hail the poet's Poet!
Life is a foggy valley and this is difficult to solve every puzzle. But still we have brief and positive hope for living peacefully. Truth never hides. Feathers of falsehood cannot cover truth. Truth dances like a flame dances over lamp. Burning candle is just an excellent example of its. This is nice poem beautifully penned....10
Truth cannot be hidden for long! It will oneday show itself out! Thank you Kumaramani sir for this lovely comment!
So much more is hidden than is revealed. It is just so overwhelming and amazing when we think about it. In a beautiful poem of yours these sentiments have found excellent expressions. Loved the last lines.
Now more is hidden than revealed! In course of time, everything will be clear! Thank you Savita!
excellent statement on life- Life is perplexing maze, mysteries (of it) lie buried in fathomless deep///
Life is a foggy valley, blurred /Obscuring manifold vistas ahead/We have to wait till the fog clears/Then truth will dance like the flame…....the reality, the ultimate truth! An insightful piece of poetry dear madam….10
Thanks a lot Dillip! Yes, in the fullness of time, truth will be revealed!
Any time I am reading a poem by you, there is always a philosophical lesson to be learned. Your profundity of thought goes far beyond of what meets the eye; and as I am reading this poem, I realise that every thing that occurs in our lives (though mysterious) , it has its time to reveal itself. A great poem!
This is exactly what I meant....! Your deep insight adds to the beauty of my poem! Thanks a lot Mihaela!
Not every puzzle is intended to be solved But every puzzle must be attempted to solve. That makes life interesting. Your poem gives this hidden message in a beautiful way. Thank you.
You are absolutely right sir! Though everything cannot be comprehended in the lucid way, there should be at least an effort from our part! Thanks a lot sir!
Life 's depth is deeper than the ocean's and it is mysterious till it's end...it appears to be dark only where a spark of light is assumed to be the Truth which is again just an assumption only and in that darkness what can be revealed other than that Spark which is an assumed hypothesis....very deep thinking on the subject has brought out this wonderful poem Valsa...congrats
However I believe in that spark and do not brush it aside an ‘assumed hypothesis’. I really enjoyed your erudite words! Thanks a lot Indira ji!
So true. We cannot discover the whole world in a few moments. Physics is now studying the quantum behavior of the smallest particles and are racing against each to understand it. It needs time. In the process we hear the most unlikely hypotheses gain traction. Slowly nature lets itself to be revealed. Rushing to understand all leads to false beliefs
You have understood the poem in its very essence! Thank you dear poet friend!