Monday, February 10, 2014
Random Reflections Comments
Rating: ★3.0
an ordinary evening
with the same trees that I love
standing apart in silence, craving to touch each other
but rooted firm in the brutal ground that distances them
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Prasanna Kumari
10 February 2014
there is feeling and pain and nostalgia in this poem....good one
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Sawan Dhyani
10 February 2014
Could have been much better if it was clearer what you want to convey through this.
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7/21/2025 1:19:05 PM # 1.0.0
Aaaahhh.. It was like, I am going through the great artistic era.. Those are free verse.. Every verse are cryptic..I love every single verse.. Trees! Aah! You portrayed it so beautifully.. And that last lines, they wanted to live longer..so mesmerized with this poem! ! ! Kudos! ! !