Monday, May 21, 2018

Random Night-Thoughts Comments

Rating: 4.6

My neck is cracking

whilst looking at the moon,
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 July 2018

A cat is meowing in the neighbourhood. This is breaking your meditation. You are looking at the moon continuously and feeling tired and this sign is felt well. Still you are very comfort acknowledging this imagery of night moon. An amazing sharing is done here with beautiful expression...10

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Hazel Durham 22 May 2018

Original and beautiful train of thoughts, I could vividly imagine the moon shining, the cat meowing in the distance and the fly finding a bed in the coniferous tree in your vase.....definitely too many beers... Great write!

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Robert Murray Smith 21 May 2018

Poetry is about random thoughts.++10

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