Tuesday, June 9, 2009

...Random Musing Comments

Rating: 5.0

The hallucinated image
of a wholesome
darkness.
flashing its incandescence,
...
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Sarvesh Kulkarni
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Ritty Patnaik 22 September 2009

dear sarvesh......the wholesome darkness sounds so perfect, in this poemto play the eternal hide and seek! i loved these lines, and the poem which carries deep meaning.just loved this poem. ritty

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Catrina Heart 29 August 2009

its only me and this unfathomable I. And our eternal hide-and-seek. --------- wow what a fabulous expression....great poetic lines..Awesome theme...10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 20 June 2009

'...a wholesome darkness flashing its incandescence'... nice expression this...poetic bright...good work Sarvesh...deep thoughts i must say...10

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Maitreyee Joshi 16 June 2009

a lovely hide and seek, i must say.thanks sarvesh

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Sathyanarayana M V S 09 June 2009

great imagery. Beautiful

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Indira Babbellapati 09 June 2009

o, yeah...the eternal hide-and-seek...will it ever end?

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Priyanka Bhowmick 09 June 2009

good piece on hallucination..nice 2 read.10

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