...Random Musing-4 Comments

I lose my all, to gain 'all'. Excellent! What a composition? What this all? Must be LOVE. Ten dr. sakti 13.08.09.

your poem comes from ether, and your thoughts too! expressed yourself beautifully.

thanks to indira maam for the fourth stanza, credit goes to her for adding great depth to the poem. thank you very much maam.

I lose my all, to gain 'all'. I write my all, to seek a sweet solace....not that what you wrote isn't good, just felt like it to give a deeper philosophical dimension...

that is a soul of the poet in u talking.

watever it is... i liked the flow of words.. :)