Friday, October 24, 2014

Random Life! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Life moves with haste
The journey is on
Wreck of mind a paradox
Group is looming as burglar
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SALINI NAIR
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Akhtar Jawad 26 October 2014

A difficult description of random life but Saliny managed it nicely.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 26 October 2014

yes, random life is so uncertain that can't be described yet poet/poetess can define - Chase with the thirst of success..thank u

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Abekah Emmanuel 26 October 2014

Life moves with haste The journey is on Wreck of mind a paradox Group is looming as burglar Chase with the thirst of success Indeed, life moves with haste and waits for no man. Lets set our priorities right and make good use of our time. Great poem!

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 October 2014

Beautiful write Salini. Beautiful way you have captured the realities of life very well. Very true said, we live a life hectic, unsure where we are running towards, but we are running towards unknown destination, which is keep us restless. Loved reading it.

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Ramesh Rai 24 October 2014

Yes! Life is random. we can not assume where life will take us. We can not peep to the gleam of liveliness. Nicely penned.

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