Random Foursome Comments

Enjoyed the whole poem but the last lines are the creme de la creme.... TO

This is a great piece, playing with ideas and examining words /terminology. The concept is a brilliant one four strangers playing golf; but hey, who says strangers. I like that level of ambivalence which finds a denouement in the last line.

I love that last line - like marbles in a divine game. It really pulls the whole poem together, showing how quickly our lives change, and at God's will.