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I really liked this one. Conjures very vivid pictures.: D

I love short poems. Unless you're Walt Whitman keep it short, and this is. You hit a home run, here.I like it. Mr. Walker exclaims 'great'' I don't agree. It's a good poem, not great. I like the title! S

Like it. A really great poem. Really enjoyed reading it. A great write. May i invite you to read my new poem called, War Of Goodwill.