Tuesday, August 30, 2005

Ramification Comments

Rating: 5.0

Annihilation,
Well defined,
Paraded past
Your defenses,
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Pamela Davison
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Max Reif 10 September 2005

Again, you end very effectively with a question. This is the one, or one of the ones, I'm thinking, in which you used, as I did, the destructiion as a personal metaphor. I find your lines strong, a little abstract, interestingly, or maybe the proper word is really 'universal'.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 31 August 2005

Very, very good. Keep writing!

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