I have an unhealthy relationship
With myself
I drink too much and talk absurd
Bring to ruin everything about me
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In my opinion this is one of your best poems! The pain of mental illness clearly evindent in your words! A 10.
Get a brain transplant from an Indian poet. Then you will write better nonsense.
Loving oneself is first. Accepting one's faults and self improvement and self love will do someone good when feeling like this. A heartfelt poem that many have felt from time to time, Don't let the hole eat you up! . Have a wonderful day.