Saturday, April 28, 2007

Ramblings Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nothing, is forever, anything can change
Everything has a never, Nothing is, forever
an inside out sleeve, a turned down collar
rumpled crumpled trouser leg
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shimon weinroth
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An abstract, & metaphoric gem, in place here...Crisp, tight structure...yet mellifluous Solid poetic elocution employed...Nice Work. FjR

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