Rambling Dan Comments

Lovely rhythmic quaility demonstrated in this fast flowing poem. A great poem Ernestine. Love, Andy xx

ERNESTINE, , , FINE WRITE HERE...CRISP&TIGHT...NICE EVENFLOW CONSTRUCTION...INTERESTING THEME'''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

Rambling is questionable, as this is right on track, as for the gambler, well who knows I know someone who suffers from this addition, many years, much money little winnings Still a well put together piece Ours for the rescuing, thats a Ten Love Duncan X

Delightful story with splendid rhyme! Patricia Gale