Saturday, August 29, 2009

Ramadan Lantern Comments

Rating: 4.9

</>Disordered lambs
Runs in dence desert
With hunger and thurst
Here and there
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Vinod Kumar U K
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 September 2009

nicely worded. good message. suggestion: runs=run, blessful= be blessful, in high= well high. shan

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Rachel Butler 07 September 2009

They followed anxiousely They felt the joy To touch the temple on land To hold the hand in high Rachel Ann Butler

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Surya . 03 September 2009

oh light.lead kindly. what a great symbolic write, . voted10 surya

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 August 2009

Hi Vinod your Ramadan poem is so solemn, considered your not a muslim, which I believe, or correct me if I'm wrong.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 August 2009

Through a simple lantern, you have shown the way for religous tolerance, saying all religions lead mankind towards the ultimate goal of highest plane of existence on this earth and making this earth another heaven.

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Sandra Fowler 30 August 2009

You take me to another world. Very beautifully and eloquently written. Best wishes, Sandra

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Chitra - 30 August 2009

a profound theme..the Higher beacon will always guide!

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Mohammed Albalushi 30 August 2009

interesting poem dear Vinod, ramadan kareem to all

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 29 August 2009

Ramazan Mobarak, a heart full of thanks 10*******

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Surya . 29 August 2009

very beautiful poem.very meaningful too. weill composed lines.thanx for sharing. keep writing such strong ones. voted10 surya

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Omar Ibrahim 29 August 2009

impressive....full of beautiful meanings..great write 10 ramadan kareem..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 29 August 2009

All the hands hold With praying minds Towards the lantern Leads the right right path........lead to right path and divine light and this is faith... i like it most. what happens if.....read

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Catrina Heart 29 August 2009

All the hands hold With praying minds Towards the lantern Leads the right right path ------- a very nice poem of ramadan.........Thanks! 10

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Vinod Kumar U K

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