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Runs in dence desert
With hunger and thurst
Here and there
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They followed anxiousely They felt the joy To touch the temple on land To hold the hand in high Rachel Ann Butler
oh light.lead kindly. what a great symbolic write, . voted10 surya
Hi Vinod your Ramadan poem is so solemn, considered your not a muslim, which I believe, or correct me if I'm wrong.
Through a simple lantern, you have shown the way for religous tolerance, saying all religions lead mankind towards the ultimate goal of highest plane of existence on this earth and making this earth another heaven.
You take me to another world. Very beautifully and eloquently written. Best wishes, Sandra
very beautiful poem.very meaningful too. weill composed lines.thanx for sharing. keep writing such strong ones. voted10 surya
impressive....full of beautiful meanings..great write 10 ramadan kareem..
All the hands hold With praying minds Towards the lantern Leads the right right path........lead to right path and divine light and this is faith... i like it most. what happens if.....read
All the hands hold With praying minds Towards the lantern Leads the right right path ------- a very nice poem of ramadan.........Thanks! 10
nicely worded. good message. suggestion: runs=run, blessful= be blessful, in high= well high. shan