Ramadan Lantern Poem by Vinod Kumar U K

Ramadan Lantern

Rating: 4.9


</>Disordered lambs
Runs in dence desert
With hunger and thurst
Here and there

The Holy Hand with
the miracle lantern
Lead them the right path
To ultimate shelter...

They followed anxiousely
They felt the joy
To touch the temple on land
To hold the hand in high

The Holy Voices
Brought peace and love
To wipe out all the sins
For able to blessfull

All the hands hold
With praying minds
Towards the lantern
Leads the right right path

RAMADAN KAREEM FOR ALL OF YOU

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 30 August 2009

You take me to another world. Very beautifully and eloquently written. Best wishes, Sandra

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Chitra - 30 August 2009

a profound theme..the Higher beacon will always guide!

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Mohammed Albalushi 30 August 2009

interesting poem dear Vinod, ramadan kareem to all

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 29 August 2009

Ramazan Mobarak, a heart full of thanks 10*******

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Surya . 29 August 2009

very beautiful poem.very meaningful too. weill composed lines.thanx for sharing. keep writing such strong ones. voted10 surya

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 September 2009

nicely worded. good message. suggestion: runs=run, blessful= be blessful, in high= well high. shan

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Rachel Butler 07 September 2009

They followed anxiousely They felt the joy To touch the temple on land To hold the hand in high Rachel Ann Butler

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Surya . 03 September 2009

oh light.lead kindly. what a great symbolic write, . voted10 surya

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 August 2009

Hi Vinod your Ramadan poem is so solemn, considered your not a muslim, which I believe, or correct me if I'm wrong.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 30 August 2009

Through a simple lantern, you have shown the way for religous tolerance, saying all religions lead mankind towards the ultimate goal of highest plane of existence on this earth and making this earth another heaven.

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Vinod Kumar U K

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