Sunday, May 3, 2009

Raleigh,4: 50 A.M. Comments

Rating: 2.8

Today I sat
by a pool.
A vacation from the stresses
of the reality I face.
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David DeSantis
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Lynda Robson 20 August 2009

Sad David, but at least now you can move on, Cheer up my friend, 10 Lynda xx

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Original Unknown Girl 20 August 2009

Sigh.... this is so sad. But Idy H is right, the final stanza is sheer brilliance. Hope you're well DD. HG: -) xx

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Idy H 31 May 2009

The last four lines are so....they hit home: the comparison is perfect. I'll quote you on it sometime soon if you don't mind

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