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Wah wah bahut khoob nazm hai, dil khus ho gaya.

A nice poem, a touching one.

Bahut khoob likha aapne Ho jane do Sooraj ko bhi madhyam Aur chaand ko rangeen Ho jane do Phir se lawleen Unn palkon me jo hai assem Bahut khoob rachna...

Prem ko samarpit ek khubsurat kavita. चारदिन की ज़िन्दगी में क्या तू-तूमै-मै करना. Prem sambandhon me pyaar hi na ho to zindagi kis kaam ki. Khaali तू-तू मैं-मैं se kya haasil higa. Thanks.

Bahut khoob. Aachi panktiyan hai. Aabhar aapka.

बहुत खूबसूरत कविता..

Thank you so much. I didn't know that someone can inspiration from my poem and will write such a brilliant poem. Great.10++

Waah bohot khoob. Ek khoobsurat ghazal.