Raison D’être Comments

Brandi this one is straight from the heart, and really plucks the lyre strings that are attached to my heart. Such loving care and thoughts from you here, a dedication to your loved one... giving you the urge to rise from not only your bed but from obscurity. The flow of this poem is also superb as is the rhyming scheme, and as you recite it.. it really does roll from the tongue in fluidic streams. Very well worded and constructed, but the emotion and drive you have put in this one make it the most stand out one. So let that special goal in your heart lead you to new horizons and better things. Great stuff Brandi! Dale :)