Tuesday, June 21, 2005

Raising The Ax Comments

Rating: 4.8

It is the sound of the log splitting
and its echo
which marks my passage
into manhood. My father stands
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Tim Gavin
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Chuck Audette 06 November 2005

Tim: You brought back a fond memory for me with your poem. My Dad showed me the technique, and I still remember the elm wood fighting and gripping our wedges in it's twisty fibers, making him glad it was no longer a one person job. Thanks. Chuck

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Michael Shepherd 02 September 2005

A fine, effective poem. Thanks.

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Raynette Eitel 21 June 2005

I can hear the echo. This poem is not only visual but auditory...and also from the heart. Nice job. Raynette

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Tim Gavin

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