Raise The Bar Comments

such a melodious composition with much beauty on the theme........Thanks! ! ! 10

raise the bar raise the bar.........and you have raised poem hunter in zest....

It's nice to sing away our pain, and raise the bar for a fresh tommorrow. Excellent write.............10

beautiful poem with meaningful lines.this para says it all 'So raise the bar, raise the bar Sing them loud, sing them loud Sing it again and again and again Let the song play and play and play Until then this grave of mine is gray ' thanx for sharing voted 10 surya

this will raise the heart of all who read for on this they can feed. very well done! a ten my friend

for me this poem was like starting at the darkest lowest point of my heart and finding the stairway and climing up to the highest and happyest place and staying there, an amazing brilliant and fabulas poem! ! ! ! ! 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Like climbing out of a pit

nice simile: ''Rise it as high as shining star That no one had touched so far'' wonderful poem, lovely rhymes............10+++

'Let the song play and play and play Until then this grave of mine is gray' This again is good, written in your usual free-flowing style, and yes sir! ! ! lets sing.. it will def turn our Grey lives in to colorful ones.. good one.. cheers shan