Listen to the tune of rain
Rain on foliage is merry
Merry also dancing heart
Heart is breezy with soul
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Ashraful, Brishti has loved the rain in your verse.I liked the rhythm of the poem.
this rain if yours if a replica of that revivifying friendship rains can I translate your poems in our own Tgalog Filipino version? or by another tounge exchanging?
rain has special importance for life and poet observes life more closely than others.nice piece of writing
ashraful going back to being a child. i could feel it here. good write.
'Soul on foot with the rain Rain singing song of love Love jumping from cloud Cloud is the love of earth' this is a musical one indeed..enjoyed it very much...nice imagery here...liked it very much..I ll admit to the fact that i m never being good at writing such nice short interesting and thought provoking phrases, this is great 10++
I once listened 'to the tune of rain' and wrote 'A rain song'. You've reminded me of it, and I'll be posting it soon. Thank you sir for singing the same song, albeit differently, beautifully
Sweet and refreshing words of rain. Lovely! A '10! ' for this verse. Warm Wishes, Marilyn
These are nice rainy verses. The form is truly poetic and describes the feelings well.
as when rain sizzles with rhythm merging in.........wonderful write,1 love it,10++
Very beautifully write, also, seductively were sounds to last of lines.10... All best, Tsira
I hear the pitter patter Of the raindrops As they fell from Your Pen! Ashraf, please read atyour leisure my Strange Moods of the Rain a collection of about 10 poems on the rain. Would love your valued comments please. Angel