Tuesday, May 19, 2009

Rainy Verse Comments

Rating: 5.0

Listen to the tune of rain
Rain on foliage is merry
Merry also dancing heart
Heart is breezy with soul
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Ashraful Musaddeq
COMMENTS
Pandian Angelina 05 September 2009

I hear the pitter patter Of the raindrops As they fell from Your Pen! Ashraf, please read atyour leisure my Strange Moods of the Rain a collection of about 10 poems on the rain. Would love your valued comments please. Angel

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Brishti Mazumdar 02 June 2009

Ashraful, Brishti has loved the rain in your verse.I liked the rhythm of the poem.

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Rommel Mark Marchan 01 June 2009

this rain if yours if a replica of that revivifying friendship rains can I translate your poems in our own Tgalog Filipino version? or by another tounge exchanging?

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Chitra - 31 May 2009

a sonorous tune flitting on the wisps of love..wonderful

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Meggie Gultiano 31 May 2009

a refreshing piece. I feel like being wet and carefree...

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Akram Saqib 30 May 2009

rain has special importance for life and poet observes life more closely than others.nice piece of writing

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John Tiong Chunghoo 30 May 2009

ashraful going back to being a child. i could feel it here. good write.

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Shashendra Amalshan 30 May 2009

'Soul on foot with the rain Rain singing song of love Love jumping from cloud Cloud is the love of earth' this is a musical one indeed..enjoyed it very much...nice imagery here...liked it very much..I ll admit to the fact that i m never being good at writing such nice short interesting and thought provoking phrases, this is great 10++

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Ency Bearis 30 May 2009

good write...rain pour into my eyes to read merrily....

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Obed Souza 29 May 2009

Playful and enchanting! Nice doing!

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Vinod Ak 29 May 2009

Fabulous creation! Lovely visualization! 10+++

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Kelvin Karani 29 May 2009

I once listened 'to the tune of rain' and wrote 'A rain song'. You've reminded me of it, and I'll be posting it soon. Thank you sir for singing the same song, albeit differently, beautifully

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Martine Kolber 28 May 2009

Lovely poem, truly like it; -) Take care, Martine

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Marilyn Lott 28 May 2009

Sweet and refreshing words of rain. Lovely! A '10! ' for this verse. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Priyanka Bhowmick 26 May 2009

beautiful words of rain.

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rohit sapra 26 May 2009

These are nice rainy verses. The form is truly poetic and describes the feelings well.

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Raj Arumugam 26 May 2009

good rhythmic echoes in the verse, Ashraful

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Estrella Baldemosa 25 May 2009

words spun in sequence that made this poem delightful! 10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 24 May 2009

as when rain sizzles with rhythm merging in.........wonderful write,1 love it,10++

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Tsira Goge 24 May 2009

Very beautifully write, also, seductively were sounds to last of lines.10... All best, Tsira

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