Thursday, July 25, 2019

Rainy Season; Two Scenes Comments

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Incessant rains, heavy down pour,
Inundating roads, bazars and residences.
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 28 August 2019

niceeeeeeeee the success you have achieved is the fact ur answering readers each what a generosity O POET

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Anil Kumar Panda 14 August 2019

What is a harsh reality! ! Suffering due to plenty. There is a contrast that give much sufferings to the people. 'Opposite these scenarios, the special gifts Of global warming and imbalanced environment Caused by huge deforestation n carbon emission Forced by self centered acts of the coterie.'... is an eye opener. Great write.10+++++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2019

Heavy downpour! ! ! ! Muse of the rain. 🌧🌨💧 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jazib Kamalvi 08 August 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Ratnakar Mandik. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 August 2019

Ratnakar ji, thank you for sharing this poem, highlighting the global warming and imbalanced environment. A full score for this seasonal poem.......10

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 August 2019

An interesting poem that portrays the power of nature with rains and without rains. Mumbai has been flooded with rains that has hampered the daily life specially for commuters and office goers.On the other hand, there are areas that are parched and dried up still..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 August 2019

The advantages and disadvantages of rain has been astutely delineated by you as scene one and scene two. Excess of water and scarcity of water both are harmful to nature and human society. The reason of it is also well inscribed by you. It may be cited....Opposite these scenarios, the special gifts / Of global warming and imbalanced environment / Caused by huge deforestation n carbon emission / Forced by self centered acts of the coterie.. This is an outstanding work.10

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Anjandev Roy 03 August 2019

Wonderful description throughout. Thank u, dear poet.anjandev roy.

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Aniruddha Pathak 27 July 2019

Two realistic pictures drawn on rains. Nature does its job no matter what, but a little helping hand goes a long way. Is man aware enough and alive to the reality?

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 July 2019

An excellent poem! Liked the second scene most! My favorite lines: Partial starvation and u quenched thirst/Has torn apart their lives and economies too/Hoping they are to move on with the glue/Of govt. sponsored aid and relief.............10

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Ratnakar Mandlik 25 July 2019

Thank you very much Dr. D.K.Swain for your inspiring comment. Typo omission in first line of 2nd stanza. It should be unquenched thirst. You always remind me my batch mate n friend D.N.Swain who too was from Odisha.

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Mahtab Bangalee 25 July 2019

RAIN, RAIN, RAIN EVERYWHERE RAIN NOW THE SURROUNDING SUFFERS PAIN WATER, WATER, WATER WATER EVERYWHERE WHEREVER YOU GO WOULDN'T FIND A FAIR DROP OF DRINKING JAR

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