Sunday, October 28, 2012

Rainy Love Story Comments

Rating: 4.8

Outside the open window pane,
Dark angry clouds mobbed the sky,
Terrified crowd emptied the lane,
Feeling the outpour from the heavens high.
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Ancita Michael
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Chandra Thiagarajan 09 November 2012

Rainy Love Story is a creditable poem written well with rhyme and rhythm.K udos.

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Unwritten Soul 02 November 2012

Traditional poetry, i like it and you make it very well...well done and the story was really fun! _Soul

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Aung Si 01 November 2012

Oh, nice whispers of the one in love. The heart will keep on murmuring its language until it gets its longing and desire.Well one, my vote is 8.

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Reyvrex Questor Reyes 28 October 2012

Wow, you have three rhyme schemes in your poem. I also believe in soulmates, even in reincarnation where a loved one may have been also in one's past.

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